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First Half of Semester One Self Reflection

Self Assessment:  Throughout the first half of the first semester I learned many things about American history that I did not already know. I also developed knew skills involving analyzing a piece of text, and how to incorporate it correctly in my writing. I learned new things about the Civil War and reconstruction, and formed new opinions on our government, Abraham Lincoln, how hectic and hard it is to pass bills, the difficulty of compromising and balancing the Union and the issue of slavery with the Confederacy. I gained new skills in knowledge on how to paraphrase, quote, and summarize a piece of text, and when it is appropriate to do so. I have really enjoyed this class so far, and the way we are learning about events in American History. I like how we focus not only on important topics, but we learn them through discussing other interesting points of views. I anticipate that I will develop new skills in analyzing text and events in history, and will continue to learn new a...

Reflection on Paraphrase Practice

Reflection on Paraphrase Practice: The activity on the process of paraphrasing, and quoting taught me when it is acceptable and appropriate to use each strategy. I learned that paraphrasing is when one rewrites the same thing another source is saying, but in your own words and then cites where that information was found. Paraphrasing is tricky because it can often be written in a way that is different then what the text is saying, and that is not okay because that changes someone else's words. Paraphrasing is used when one wants to include all the details of another source to make a point clear. A summary is a brief description of another sources ideas. This is used when describing the main ideas of a statement. It is appropriate to use a quote when including exactly what someone else said, because their word choice helped prove your argument (make sure to cite where the quote came from or it is plagiarism). This is what I learned today: - only use a direct quote when it add...

practicing incorporating a quotation

The film "Lincoln" shocked me in a way where I know view politics differently. The film portrayed how messy and difficult politics, passing the amendments, getting votes....the whole process in general can be. According to the film critic, Roger Ebert, " The White House is less a temple of state than a gathering place for wheelers and dealers ." Explaining that although we view the white house as a "temple" or safe calm place, it is more of a crazy place where "wheelers and dealers" or the people working for the country are trying to get stuff done. 

paraphrase practice revised

Excerpt from article: "Lincoln lacked social polish but he had great intelligence and knowledge of human nature. The hallmark of the man, performed so powerfully by  Daniel Day-Lewis  in "Lincoln," is calm self-confidence, patience and a willingness to play politics in a realistic way. The film focuses on the final months of Lincoln's life, including the passage of the 13th Amendment ending slavery, the surrender of the Confederacy and his assassination. Rarely has a film attended more carefully to the details of politics." -  passage by Roger Ebert; a review on the film "Lincoln " Paraphrase: Lincoln fell short of communicative skills, yet he possessed great insight on natural human instinct. The symbol of Lincoln, played so effectively by Daniel Day-Lewis, represents a tranquil self importance, willingness to endure and compliance to play politics in a sensible way. The movie highlights the concluding moments of Lincoln's life, as well as ...

paraphrase practice

"Lincoln lacked social polish but he had great intelligence and knowledge of human nature. The hallmark of the man, performed so powerfully by  Daniel Day-Lewis  in "Lincoln," is calm self-confidence, patience and a willingness to play politics in a realistic way. The film focuses on the final months of Lincoln's life, including the passage of the 13th Amendment ending slavery, the surrender of the Confederacy and his assassination. Rarely has a film attended more carefully to the details of politics." - passage by Roger Ebert; a review on the film "Lincoln " Paraphrase: Lincoln fell short of communicative skills, yet he possessed great insight on natural human instinct. The symbol of Lincoln, played so effectively by Daniel Day-Lewis, represents a tranquil self importance, willingness to endure and compliance to play politics in a sensible way. The movie highlights the concluding moments of Lincoln's life, as well as the 13th amendment and ...

Letters to the family of a Union Private:

Letters to the family of a Union Private: Joseph Jones wrote a collection of letters to his wife, Nancy E. Jones during different times in the civil war. Joseph was a union private in the 79 th Illinois infantry. The letters where written from where he was placed at that time in the war, they include; Louisville, KY (September 7,1862), Murfreesboro, Tenn.(February 11,1863), Tullahoma, Tenn.(August 7, 1863), Chattanooga Tenn.(November 10, 1863), and Dallas, Tenn.(June 5, 1864). The letters consist of Joseph telling his wife about what is happening in the war. His descriptions of the war are very vague. He mentions various times that he does not want to talk or think too much about the battles, because they are just to hard for him. Instead he focuses his letters on his family and how he cares about and loves them and wants them to be raised right. He talks of his morals and how important they are to him. Joseph speaks highly of African Americans in his letters and see...